LESSON 185

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KEY PHRASE
I think this could be even stronger if...
Constructive feedback
A woman and a man stand beside a desk in a bright office, looking at printed reports and discussing edits with calm, focused expressions.
Sarah
The draft is good, Daniel, but I think this could be even stronger if the opening were a bit shorter.
Daniel
Sure, I can tighten it up.
Sarah
Great, the main points are clear.